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said-bookisms

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Writing lessons — dialog and said-bookisms

“Stop!” he commanded. “Where are you going?” she inquired. “I miss you so much,” he said sadly. All of these are said-bookisms and will knock an editor out of a story faster than a line drive into the stands. (By the way, did you know there’s a book on baseball Read more…

By Patrice Sarath, 13 years13 years ago
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