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Writing lessons — show, not tell

When you take part in a writing workshop or writers group, you will often be told, “show, not tell.” So what does this mean? When you tell, you remove the reader from the action, characters, setting and plot, leaching the emotional reaction the reader has to your story. When you Read more…

By Patrice Sarath, 17 yearsMay 21, 2009 ago
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Deleted scenes — the lost prologue to Red Gold Bridge

Words: 1,525. Music. The KGSR compilation CD Broadcasts volume 16. (Note: I don’t like prologues. I think that the device is overused in fantasy and is relied upon by writers who don’t start in the right place. One exception is the prologue to G.R.R. Martin’s Song of Ice and Fire Read more…

By Patrice Sarath, 17 yearsApril 8, 2009 ago
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Deleted scenes — the map store

(Note:  If there is a scene that is at the heart of what I was trying to get at in Gordath Wood, it is this one. Gordath Wood is about getting lost between worlds. Maps don’t work. The Wood itself misleads travelers. A map only shows the trails, but it Read more…

By Patrice Sarath, 17 yearsApril 1, 2009 ago

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