Patrice Sarath

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March 2010

Gordath Wood Book III

To prologue or not to prologue?

Do prologues work or are they just authors marking time? I added a prologue to GWIII and brought it to my writer’s group for their perusal. Here’s what I heard: “lacks urgency.” “Needs to start earlier at a more crucial moment.” “Characters aren’t engaged.” And my favorite — “It’s a Read more…

By Patrice Sarath, 16 years ago
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Colar’s story — part I

“Yo, white boy! You just gonna stand there or you gonna play?” Colar started. He’d been watching the black kids play a fluid, fast game of basketball, and kind of forgot where he was. The kid who hollered at him bounced the ball impatiently, waiting. He knew he shouldn’t play. Read more…

By Patrice Sarath, 16 yearsMarch 1, 2010 ago

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